• Angcorwut (talk · contribs)
  • Draft:Myla Villanueva (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs)

Can I ask the team to review my updated submission if it merits approval, I adjusted the content accordingto the feedback left by the editors https://en.wikipedia.orghttps://demo.azizisearch.com/lite/wikipedia/page/Draft:Myla_Villanueva

Thanks! Cor Angcorwut (talk) 08:16, 15 November 2018 (UTC)angcorwut[reply]

Angcorwut (talk) 08:16, 15 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]

• Rlmintern (talk · contribs)
  • Draft:DAVIE (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs)

I am requesting help because two of the links I am trying to use to cite on my DAVIE page are blacklisted. I went to request that they be removed on the whitelist page, however, it still would not let me publish the links to even request that they are granted access. The links are from Ticketmaster, but are links to blogs written about the artist, not tickets. Rlmintern (talk) 15:19, 15 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Rlmintern, it seems that the reason your revisions got deleted was because they were copyright violations. Please review the policy I linked and make sure that content you add is sourced BUT is your own original thoughts.

By blacklisted I assume you mean that they tripped an edit filter? Try linking the blogs directly in that case. Best, ProgrammingGeek ^talktome 16:06, 15 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]

• Danmiddlehurst (talk · contribs)
  • Taulia (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)

I'm trying to publish an article about a company Taulia - who provide financial technology solutions. However, I can't seem to get it published as the feedback is that it's too 'marketing' sounding. Please can you provide some specific feedback so I can get this published? Danmiddlehurst (talk) 21:46, 15 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Sure - I have a 4 year business degree and substantial additional business education but I can't understand what "a global working capital solutions provider that provides supply chain finance, dynamic discounting and invoicing services " means exactly. The company might be notable but the whole page stinks of promotional language and marketing buzz speak. Put the page in English please. Legacypac (talk) 21:52, 15 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]

The word "solution" is a paticularly huge red flag. Unless the topic is disolved substances or a mathematical problem it is meaningless marketingspeak. It is so bad that it usually irretrievably contaminates the entire paragraph or even the whole page. Any source that uses the word should be treated with apropriate skepticism. Roger (Dodger67) (talk) 07:19, 16 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]