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Dear Wikipedia member,
My article is not accepted because the references are considered as not independant from the subject. I do not understand how a reference can be independant from the subject. Since they have to be related to each other. Also, I checked the other wikipedia page in the same context, as the Nobel Prize https://en.wikipedia.orghttps://demo.azizisearch.com/lite/wikipedia/page/Nobel_Prize and most of its references are related to its main website. I kindly ask you to review, and help me by indicating how I could improve this page.
Thanks in advance for your support
Best regards, Constance
I need to change the title of the draft - and there aren't any obvious way of doing so. I want to introduce an Anglicisation of the artist's first name by dropping the 's' at the end of 'Arnolds'. In Latvian, a first name like his would attract an 's' at the end. In English this sounds odd and I am fairly sure that he would have lost the 's' in professional and social situations when in English speaking company. I have deleted this particular 's' throughout the rest of the draft (at least I hope I have done so).
4/26/16
Re: https://en.wikipedia.orghttps://demo.azizisearch.com/lite/wikipedia/page/Draft:Inspire_%28company%29
Hi,
I believe I have made improvements to my submission and would welcome feedback before I resubmit for consideration. I have made a formal disclosure as to my relationship with Inspire, for whom I work. I have removed the peacock terms and what were flagged as sources not acceptable to Wikipedia, and added more authoritative sources. If I'm missing something obvious, I'd appreciate your guidance.
Thanks in advance,
John Novack (JTNwriter)JTNwriter (talk) 18:52, 26 April 2016 (UTC)