Hi I've been working on my first article Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Gil sheffer

A large part of it is actually a translation from his page in Hebrew. I'm not sure how to attack the new page I'm writing in English with the original in Hebrew. Thanks JamesHunter1 (talk) 14:30, 25 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Hi James, First, read the Wikipedia Notability Requirements For People. Second, think about how Gil Sheffer will meet these requirements--what is it that makes him notable? Third, rewrite the article around that--leaving out any extemporaneous info, keeping in mind this is an encyclopedia entry not Gil's CV (as it currently reads). Fourth, look to source the article with additional articles than are currently provided--from independent secondary sources. I hope this advice helps. Dalisays (talk) 16:26, 25 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]