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Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Acid2/archive1 Source: en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Featured_article_candidates/Acid2/archive1

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The article was not promoted 00:07, 17 May 2008.

Acid2

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I've done quite a bit of work on this article, and I think that it provides a nice, well sourced, comprehensive discussion of the Acid2 test. I hope that it will be selected as a featured article and I welcome suggestions on how to improve it further. —Remember the dot (talk) 00:06, 6 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]

  • Comments:
  • "versions these browsers are expected" - +'of'
  • I think the non-compliant applications section focuses too much on IE in comparison the amount of time spent discussing Gecko-based browsers. In fact there is almost no mention in the prose sections of the article of Firefox, Opera, etc.
  • "Lie challenged Microsoft to design Internet Explorer 7, then in development, to pass the test." I think that should probably be rephrased to something like 'challenged Microsoft to pass with the test with their under-developement Internet Explorer 7', unless he actually did challenge them to write a new version of IE that they hadn't already been planning to make anyway

-- Naerii 00:20, 6 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]

The grammar is fixed. There are two reasons why IE gets so much coverage. First, the test was originally designed with Internet Explorer's pitiful standards support in mind. Second, Internet Explorer 8 passes the test...sort of. It takes extra space to explain the "sort of". If Microsoft decides to make IE8 pass properly for the final release, then this article's prose will be cut down quite a bit. —Remember the dot (talk) 00:28, 6 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

Being on the road, I didnt check external links. Ealdgyth - Talk 23:31, 9 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Finally, I've gone through the other references you mentioned correcting problems, and http://www.princexml.com/samples/acid2/ works fine for me. —Remember the dot (talk) 04:10, 10 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]
And now there are four more citations to back up and reinforce the Opera Mini paragraph. —Remember the dot (talk) 04:25, 10 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

  • First up, I don't have an issue with it being "full of lists" or whatever. Rtd, I suggest you raise this at WT:FAC if you are unsure.
  • re. the reliable source issues above, the SEO FAC is a good read.
  • "It was developed in the spirit of the Acid1 test, a relatively narrow test of Cascading Style Sheets (CSS) compliance." - perhaps move "the" and "test" on either side of Acid1; considering the name and the subsequent use of "test" it's fairly obvious what Acid1 is.
  • "However, later on Microsoft joined other browser makers" - reword...perhaps start with "Microsoft later joined..."
  • "On 23 April 2005, Acid2 was updated to fix a bug" - no more detail on this?
  • Why all the whitespace around this image?
    • Because I wanted all the screenshots for all the browsers to be the same size, and the easiest way to do that is to change the screen resolution to 800x600 (the smallest video resolution that I could use without going through a significant amount of trouble) and set the browser to full screen. —Remember the dot (talk) 23:28, 13 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Changing font sizes, zoom level, applying user stylesheets, etc." - "etc." isn't really encyclopediac...if the list of ways to break the test is too length, just say "Actions such as changing font sizes..."
  • "will not display an object element's content or its fallback content" - the wiktionary link seems irrelevant here (click it; nothing about computing).
    • It does explain that fallback means "A backup plan or contingency strategy; an alternative which can be used if something goes wrong with the main plan; a recourse." I don't think that the word "fallback" is widely used, so a link to a dictionary definition seemed like a good idea. —Remember the dot (talk) 23:28, 13 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • "However, the prerelease version of Gecko 1.9 passes the test, and so future versions of these browsers are expected to pass the test." - could this do without the repeated use of "test"...reads poorly
  • Several of the listed external links could feasibly be used as references...they're not really doing much in that section.

dihydrogen monoxide (H2O) 11:13, 13 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]

  • Comment. Quite a few aspects of the subject are not addressed, or only addressed briefly. The lists in "Overview" and "Passing conditions" should be written as prose and explained. What does "CSS generated content" or "hovering effects" mean? The average reader needs an explanation. This should also have more info about how the test was developed and how it is performed. How accepted is it in the industry? A gallery is usually a sign of an article in development. Some images could be merged with the non-compliant applications section. Gimmetrow 19:42, 13 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]
    • Thanks for the suggestions. Please go ahead and help implement them if you'd like, as I don't think I'll have enough time to work on them right away. —Remember the dot (talk) 23:28, 13 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]
    • The gallery is there to illustrate just how poorly various browsers perform, and only major releases of browsers that were available when Acid2 was released or afterwards are included. A potentially larger gallery is available at Commons:Acid2. The images were originally included as thumbnails down the side of the article, but this was rather ugly and a side-by-side comparison using the <gallery> tag is much nicer-looking. —Remember the dot (talk) 23:28, 13 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • Re:lists/charts -- in my view, this is not a strong objection unless you can explain why the information would better be presented as prose. For instance, in this article, the last large table and the list of compliant browsers look like good candidates for the type of presentation they currently use. Christopher Parham (talk) 22:20, 13 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]
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